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@@ -5,8 +5,11 @@ require($_SERVER["DOCUMENT_ROOT"] . "/header.php");
 ?>
 <p>
 	I'm Kai Stevenson, and this is my personal Web site for things that I like, such as programming, music, philosophy, and photography. 
-	Whereas I've done some cool things and whereas people sometimes like looking at cool things, you may want
-	to follow one of the links below.
+	I've set up this site as a sort of living document to catalogue my work and thoughts. Some pages are hidden behind other pages,
+	and the specific arrangement of hyperlinks between them generally correlates with the personal connections I make between those
+	subjects or ideas. In that sense, by exploring this site you are following along with my personal interpretation of the world.
+	You can start at one of the following index pages, which each contain more domain-specific information. Alternatively, you can
+	view the <a href="about/">about page</a>, which details the web technologies used to build this site, as well as my own short bio.
 </p>
 <ul>
 	<li><h3><a href="writing/">~/doc/</a> /* My writing and notes */</h3></li>
@@ -15,21 +18,4 @@ require($_SERVER["DOCUMENT_ROOT"] . "/header.php");
 	<li><h3><a href="photography/">~/pic/</a> /* My photography */</h3></li>
 	<li><h3><a href="etc/">~/etc/</a> /* The rest */</h3></li>
 </ul>
-<h2>About Me</h2>
-<p>
-	An absence of personal information on this site is to be attributed less to modesty and more to
-	laziness. That said, I recognize
-	that some may wish to believe that I am a real human with a real human life, so I've collated some
-	official Kai Stevenson trivia:
-</p>
-<ul>
-	<li><p>I was born in 2004, making me ($CURRENTYEAR-2004) years old!</p></li>
-	<li><p>My favourite movie is the 1939 propaganda piece <i>Ninotchka</i></p></li>
-	<li><p>I live in the Pacific Northwest, south of the 49th and north of the border</p></li>
-	<li><p>I was at home minding my own business on the night of January 16th 2020. Please stop asking</p></li>
-	<li><p>I have a cat and a dog</p></li>
-</ul>
-<p>
-	If you want to learn more about me (and I'm sure you do), you'll find that on the <a href=about.php>about page</a>.
-</p>
 <?php require($_SERVER["DOCUMENT_ROOT"] . "/footer.php"); ?>